Well, a bunch of people pointed out the cock looked a bit shit. I'm not changing the shape a lot, because it's closely linked to her animation, but here's a tweaked version. Any better? *edit* Tiny extra tweak.
still looks prett much like a stick of wood(too long too think, should be thicker in the middle and i think its a bit too long wouldnt look that long if the balls would be seen, but if they are hidden it looks about what...10-12 inch?)
I've been looking at the thing for too long, so it just looks perfectly normal to me. Hell, cocks come in all shapes and sizes. I'll keep trying, but that's probably as good as it's going to get at the moment.
First release is coming very soon, but there are lots of things still to finish. I'm just not posting about them here because it's kind of boring. Don't worry, I'm not just drawing dicks.
Oh God. No no no no no. I fear the worst: constant hypocritical criticsm from both sides that will drive you up the wall and quit the project. It happened before. And I don't want to see it happen again.
Well it looks fine to me but I guess I add a few finer points.
I don't think you can realistically add a hole at this 90 degree angle. That... that would be a weird looking cock.
To make the vines look more pronounced, add a slight tinge of green to where they protrude the most.
There is no evidence that this cock has or ever had a foreskin. If this poor chap was circumcised, then the space right behind the head should be a lighter color, followed by a dark brown scar then what you have already behind that.
If had wasn't circumcised then I guess the space behind the head should look loose somehow.
Add some more details. My penis has blue veins running down the side. Oh and at least add the option for pubic hair. Nothing better than deep throat into the muff.
Cock looks pretty reasonable, but I'll probably be looking more at the face of the girl. And is the dude going to be always wearing clothes? I mean how long are the girls going into the cock? Would be sweet to see their noses going against the dudes pubic hair.
My body is ready. Good job by the way, looks very nice and seems to have a very good selection of neat things that will make this game great, keep up the awesome work.
It's only a censored blur or black bar in the shitty flash games. This looks it's going to be far from shitty so why not work on fixing the minor flaws?
Also, the head needs to be bigger imo. Perhaps add a scaler to adjust both head size, and shaft LENGTH. I realize girth needs to be consistant for animation purposes. Maybe get a general shape and let people adjust the length/head size? I'm a flash fag so I could draw a more ideal junk and send it to you in an .fla if you're interested in 3rd party support.
Alright, I've added a version that's pretty much like that shop (thanks again). But I'm not that happy with how it makes the animation look and I don't want to spend a long time adjusting that yet, so it's not going to be the default. If you want it you just need to select it from the "Him" options.
still looks prett much like a stick of wood(too long too think, should be thicker in the middle and i think its a bit too long wouldnt look that long if the balls would be seen, but if they are hidden it looks about what...10-12 inch?)
ReplyDeletebetter but still weird shape, needs a hole at the end too (should be pretty easy)
ReplyDeletebellend (glans) is too small, you could make it take up more space without it fucking with the animations.
ReplyDeletenot to be a dick (see what I did there) but could we just have a demo, I want to see this game in action
ReplyDeleteI've been looking at the thing for too long, so it just looks perfectly normal to me. Hell, cocks come in all shapes and sizes.
ReplyDeleteI'll keep trying, but that's probably as good as it's going to get at the moment.
First release is coming very soon, but there are lots of things still to finish. I'm just not posting about them here because it's kind of boring. Don't worry, I'm not just drawing dicks.
Oh God. No no no no no. I fear the worst: constant hypocritical criticsm from both sides that will drive you up the wall and quit the project. It happened before. And I don't want to see it happen again.
ReplyDeleteWell it looks fine to me but I guess I add a few finer points.
ReplyDeleteI don't think you can realistically add a hole at this 90 degree angle. That... that would be a weird looking cock.
To make the vines look more pronounced, add a slight tinge of green to where they protrude the most.
There is no evidence that this cock has or ever had a foreskin. If this poor chap was circumcised, then the space right behind the head should be a lighter color, followed by a dark brown scar then what you have already behind that.
If had wasn't circumcised then I guess the space behind the head should look loose somehow.
Add some more details. My penis has blue veins running down the side. Oh and at least add the option for pubic hair. Nothing better than deep throat into the muff.
ReplyDeleteCock looks pretty reasonable, but I'll probably be looking more at the face of the girl.
ReplyDeleteAnd is the dude going to be always wearing clothes? I mean how long are the girls going into the cock? Would be sweet to see their noses going against the dudes pubic hair.
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ReplyDeleteDick experts.
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As more sucking occurs, the veins/look of the hardness of the cock should become more prominent until orgasm.
ReplyDeleteLooks fine to me.
ReplyDeleteI suggest enlarging the penis head like so:
ReplyDeletehttp://img197.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=01460_bigger_123_402lo.jpg
(Don't worry, it's just an edit of the screenshot.)
It also makes the shaft's upper side curve upward slightly, which looks more correct to me.
You know, I didn't have any complaints about the dick, but that edit actually looks a lot better.
ReplyDeleteAgreed, the edit is better.
ReplyDeleteI would also have to say the edit adds what is missing form it.
ReplyDeleteWhere is the download link?
ReplyDeleteHey, I see what you mean actually. Thanks, anonymous shopper!
ReplyDeleteI'll try to get closer to that without fucking up the animation too much.
Nice work! Can't wait to see the first version. I'm waiting with (mastur)bated breath.
ReplyDeleteThat shop was actually pretty good. I was ok with the previous version of the cock, but if there's a chance do make it like that, please do! :D
ReplyDeleterelease a demo! just one scene, i'm dying to try this! D:
ReplyDeleteCan we get a video please? :')
ReplyDeleteso will fellatio be all the program does?
ReplyDeleteAdd curvature to it cause damn never seen a flat boner before.
ReplyDeleteI don't know why everybody's concerned with the dick. Its usually a censored blur or black bar. People are worrying about that too much.
ReplyDeleteI'm still excited over all the options for the girls. Makeup and breasts preferences I'm in!
My body is ready. Good job by the way, looks very nice and seems to have a very good selection of neat things that will make this game great, keep up the awesome work.
ReplyDeleteIt's only a censored blur or black bar in the shitty flash games. This looks it's going to be far from shitty so why not work on fixing the minor flaws?
ReplyDeleteWould you cock fixated fags stop bugging him?
ReplyDeleteThe penis looks just fine now.
I hope I'm mistaken, but I believe this guy's the most successful troll. Ever.
ReplyDeletewow you guys are pretty gay
ReplyDeletejust saying man, I'd rather complain about breasts than dicks.
inb4 cut/uncut thread
ReplyDeleteAlso, the head needs to be bigger imo.
Perhaps add a scaler to adjust both head size, and shaft LENGTH. I realize girth needs to be consistant for animation purposes.
Maybe get a general shape and let people adjust the length/head size?
I'm a flash fag so I could draw a more ideal junk and send it to you in an .fla if you're interested in 3rd party support.
Don't even joke about this being a troll. Seriously...
ReplyDeleteAlright, I've added a version that's pretty much like that shop (thanks again). But I'm not that happy with how it makes the animation look and I don't want to spend a long time adjusting that yet, so it's not going to be the default. If you want it you just need to select it from the "Him" options.
ReplyDeletei know her name is already on the vote list but i would love it if you could add Ivy Valentine from soul calibur THANK YOU :D
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